Rose Petals Poem by Xelam Kan™

Rose Petals

Rating: 4.7


The darkness is drifting slowly away
and made her alarmed in sleep
and dismay.
Dreams that made her charms
more radiant,
But now melted it as mist at day.

It's a miserable poignancy
That reflects a lover`s tendency
And can only be rejoiced
If it blessed as a beloved choice.

Ah! How hypnotic was that scene
That amused my heart serene,
When her dazzling smile
Caused a dimple sweet for a while.

Let my heart be bloomed
in your love,
With those bosom peaks and rosy cheeks;
to hold them close
As petals of rose.

Saturday, December 22, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fatima Fatimzahra 22 December 2012

very sensitively, nice and lovely

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Hazel Durham 22 December 2012

So romantic, delicate and fragile with superb imagery, just beautiful!

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Lyrical charm and superseding weight of good diction make this write a fine one.

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Monciana Edmondson 23 December 2012

well-written, loved the rhyme and imagery of the words...

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Howard Johnson 23 December 2012

Enjoyable and fun to read

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Ciarli Ling 03 February 2013

Great John, you have talent, I must admit.

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Kanav Justa 17 January 2013

very beautiful poem, , , , loved it, , ,

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Vivek Tiwari 04 January 2013

How tender and smooth a expression As seems to spread the fragrance to seren the heart like Rose Petals. Love it greatly.

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Kavya . 03 January 2013

v nice..simple soothing poem as soft as touch of a rose petal

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Shivani Misra 03 January 2013

Beautiful one and i love the title :) keep Sharing.

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