Neel Patel


My Life - Poem by Neel Patel

I Wake up at Six, i mean it's not fix.
After brushing my teeth, i go take shower, and whn i come back, my mom makes me pancake tower.
When i go to my bus lot, after ten minutes it starts feeling hot.
When my bus comes, i hear sound of drums.
When i step in my school, i stop feeling kind of cool.
I always walk fast, making sure no question is asked.
After i step in my classroom, i alway smell perfume.
I always wonder that where does that smell come from, but my friends gether me to say ' Welcome'.
When my teacher starts teaching, i'd always be reaching, for the pencil she keeps near the photo of lot of sheeps.
When i go home, i'd open Google Chrome.
After reaching Yahoo! Mail, i'd read a news about fast snail.
After my homework is done, i'd start having some fun.
To play minecraft i start my Xbox, and start putting some cubes and blocks.
Then i go to sleep, making sure there is no sound, not even a beep.
Then i'd turn the light off which is too bright, and say outloud ' goodnight'


Comments about My Life by Neel Patel

  • Gold Star - 5,670 Points Savita Tyagi (5/17/2013 7:31:00 AM)

    It is wonderful to be a kid and write about is even more fun. Very cool poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 2, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, May 3, 2013


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