My Garden Poem by ratnaprabha raykar

My Garden

Rating: 2.7


Dreading the worst, I stepped into my garden

steeling myself for a situation grave...

after lastnight's rainblast

fearing for my saplings small

big ones did not merit my fear

but stood still I.....

The saplings seemed refreshed as after a coffee

big ones shone with greenery,

if green could

and the lawn seemed perfect

I need not fear...

as Almighty cares

I need not fear for my young ones too

as the Almighty that cares for THEM

cares for MINE too

Friday, October 30, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: garden
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 04 April 2010

A sweet prayer in trust and faith. CP

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Kesav Easwaran 22 February 2010

nice Ratna...the way you bring in your theme is really nice...superb presentation technique...poetic intelligence...10

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Dhanya M G 30 October 2009

thanks for a wonderful poem...

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ratnaprabha raykar

ratnaprabha raykar

hubli karnataka, india
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