My Maid Poem by ratnaprabha raykar

My Maid

Rating: 2.0


Ramanna, Ramanna...kept saying the maid

in the flat above mine

I was quizzed...

busy was she teaching the first lessons to the kid

making him aware of the sound of his own name

it brought a smile to my lips





suddenly remembered I

the role played by my maid
in teaching my children

I never had realised!

chiding myself myself for taking all the credit

I searched for her -

but in vain

gone was she in the darkness of the past

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 23 March 2010

symbolic...good poetic 'find'...with the aid of the mind's search light...10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 22 March 2010

searched for her - but in vain gone was she in the darkness of the past.................impressionistic style by diction, yet of unique genre,10+++, thanks for sharing

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ratnaprabha raykar

ratnaprabha raykar

hubli karnataka, india
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