My Fate Is Hell Poem by Jane Trott

Waoh! Lovely poem though the mood is sad.

It sounds as if the subject of the poem commits suicide, and he blame his Angel for not saving his soul, and also admit that it was his fault, this is a good poem, depicting hopelessness, you r good.

Sad indeed. Beautifuly written, though.

very sad poem... but wonderful writing. you`re true talent)

Pessimistic. Try reading my love poems and enjoy and comment as well. Thank u

beautiful...very poignant write. i love this

Ah, before you take such a terrible step, consider your brave country's poet Anna Akhmatova. There is always a higher purpose to the disappointments of life. I give you her example of true courage. poem translated into English: When you're drunk it's so much fun - Your stories don't make sense. An early fall has strung The elms with yellow flags. We've strayed into the land of deceit And we're repenting bitterly, Why then are we smiling these Strange and frozen smiles? We wanted piercing anguish Instead of placid happiness... I won't abandon my comrade, So dissolute and mild. 1911 (Paris

YOUR POEM IS FULL OF EMOTIONS AND THEY ARE FELT YOU HAVE A VERY NICE SET OF WORDS THEY CREATE THE SCENE SO WELL AND I IMAGINED THE PAIN YOU FEEL. very nice, ten votes for this

Don't be tired of the life. The are more to feel in this world's another side. If you feel to like suicide, Just try a poem to write.