Saturday, June 9, 2012

My Fate Comments

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I have flown to the limitless skies
While bewitched by your bittersweet lies...
On you I placed my heart's desire and hope
But, instead, you betrayed my trust...
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Romeo Della Valle
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Meena Mustafa 26 July 2012

Wow! Wow! Wow! I am speechless.... A BEAUTIFUL write.

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Oladehinde J Ibikunle 23 June 2012

Heartbreak! Heartbreak! ! This is a lovely emotion purged out in a beautiful couplets.

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Hans Vr 19 June 2012

Very good poem. I love the very positive ending. So much wisdom in this poem. So refreshing Very thoughtfully written. Excellent

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Valerie Dohren 17 June 2012

Great poem - we all strive to be masters of our own domain.

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Karen Sinclair 17 June 2012

Master of your domain... great tie up line to recognition that you are able to take your future and enjoy it and maybe hushing past pains under the rug...good luck in life and love... karen

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Goddy Nana-mens 16 June 2012

Good poem, Romeo. Heart-felt.

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Allemagne Roßmann 15 June 2012

Fate draws its own line.It can be felt but cannot be observed and controlled.It can only be charged with positive energy thinking its a battery to success rendering human connection, love, job, studies etc.The properties as such it has also a limit of acceptance and this capacity maturity is measured by the age and experience.I wish the lines you have nourished what could have been a lifetime for many make your name ageless not like the melodramatic Romeo or cult alfa romeos merlon brando or mafias, de niros what most europeans coin italians as in US database.Exception was a Balboa who boxed with destiny.Life`s highway does not bother about anything.Only mobility with time.Time is a best healer of looking pictures without frame in introspection.Many of us do share not the snapshots meant to be shared in public to ease problems.We all tend to become flowers fresh from a shop just bought.This way many unknown flowers though smelling sometimes better and looking better loses the very dignity and affinity to humans to be concocted in love beyond worries but also withers away leaving an impact behind to digest.Well written and great application of poetry.Bravo!

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Marvin Brato 15 June 2012

Amazing poetry, very expressive! Thanks for sharing!

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Wahab Abdul 14 June 2012

''I offered you pure love but you played a game, Making me look like a picture without a frame... You designed that game and played it well, Turning my life into a living Hell...'' thought provoking stanza of a beautiful poem, i love this.

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Elna Nel 14 June 2012

Powerful! Can relate to your words.

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(De Va) 13 June 2012

absolutely stunning.....I could feel such sad passion...thanks for your invitation to read, blessings..Deva

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Marieta Maglas 13 June 2012

Your poem is impeccable written.I think that there a few poets in this world being capable to express the sorrow so well as you expressed it in this love poem.I like also the rhymes.Mari.

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Heather Wilson 13 June 2012

Such a beautiful poem, I found inspiration from, thank you.

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Lenore Lee 12 June 2012

Beautiful. This poem reminds me of Invictus, I am the master of my fate; I am the captain of my soul. Stay strong Romeo!

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Eric Cockrell 12 June 2012

and now you are a stronger you!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 June 2012

battered breath ruffles as when betrayed heart learns to know riff of cadence narrow path of pretension yet deludes as love bewilders in deep dark of wilderness, oh what a write dear Romeo! quite poignant yet painful by rune of fate, endearment suffers through lurid betrayal in game of love, yet wrought ingenious by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing i am quite inspired to see you here after a long time! ! !

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Kasia Fedyk 12 June 2012

Oh my God Romeo, this is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read, it is sublime. Yes, in Gods hands I Ieave my fate. Thank you so much Romeo and many Blessings to you Always! Thank you, Love and Light

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Ramesh Rai 12 June 2012

certainly a nice flow in your poem. but i feel pain to read your poem.You are a poet. if you express like this then what other will do. I like the last line. Gone are the worries and pain, I am master of my own domain.... But my brother, keep writing.your fate is always good and will be always good. Best of luck. plz read my poem flames of desire. you will find peace.

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Neela Nath Das 11 June 2012

So nice depiction of beloved's impression--Picture without frame! The positivity of the philosophy of life is strong here.Love's lost but the zeal for life acts as a driving force to go ahead.Terrific Sir! Like U may I grate 10++++++++++?

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Simon Collins 11 June 2012

Moving on in well chosen words, realizing your true worth, great poem, thank you

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