My Family Poem by roushan banu

My Family

Rating: 5.0


Dad's advice with love,
Mom's shout with hug.
Brother's fight with care,
Grandma's blabber with old stories....

Sometimes i get bored with Dad's advice,
Sometimes i get irritated with Mom's shout,
Sometimes i get annoyed with Brother's fight,
Sometimes i get angry with Grandma's blabber....

BUT.....
Dad's love
Mom's hug
Brother's care
Grandma's old stories
According to me
PRICELESS.....

If i have a rebirth
I want to born back in this same family

I praise my Family
I love My Family
Thank u GOD for My Family.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 21 March 2009

A beautiful love and care written piece, nicely placed thoughts

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Analou Pabalate 21 March 2009

ofcourse............we are not here in this world without them.......and we are existing because of them.............whatever we achieve in life......and wherever we go, , , , , , , the blood and the genuine concern and the unconditional love will always be your side because they give it to you.As family is the basic unit of the society...there we start and build our characters whatever we will be in the fuuture that is because of our family. We are what we are now because of our family. thank you so much. hope this poem will touch the hearts of every individual most especially to the rebel young ones. Who thinks they are in the right way and never listening to the good avices suggestions of their family.....very good poem. i am inspired....simple but means a lot.

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Mohammed Albalushi 21 March 2009

yes thank to the God for been in such family, wonderful feeling experss, well done

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Chitra - 22 March 2009

a sincere poem bringing out the essence of family and its importance its the only shelter that protects us unconditionally...it the canopy of bliss

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Ali Ahmed 30 March 2009

Great......simply a true theme.....+10

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Kurt Behle 24 March 2009

This time I am truelly speechless...Two Thumbs way up! ! ! ! ! ! ! exellent work 'LOVE'

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Mimi Fakhira 23 March 2009

Beautiful, roushan! A very good expression, too. Keep it up! 10...

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a cute and responsible poem. u have expressed ur feelings like a child. good work......

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a cute and responsible poem. u have expressed ur feelings like a child. good work......

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