Reminds Me U........ Poem by roushan banu

Reminds Me U........

Rating: 5.0


Each road i cross
Each lovers i pass
Each person i talk
Each area i walk

Each flower i pick
Each label i stick
Each page i read
Each bird i feed

Each word i write
Each time i fight
Each move i make
Each cake i bake

Each song i hear
Each exam i fear
Each food i eat
Each place i sit

Reminds me U..... U..... and only U.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 21 March 2009

Your poems are very good I appreciate this one..thank you..

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~ Jon London ~ 21 March 2009

I agree with Eyan, its a bit too much with the each, in every line. But i like the piece, it was written with heart and that makes you a poet. Keep going

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Analou Pabalate 21 March 2009

aha...........guesss you are in love..... like me my man always in my clock.ammm. each words you said declares you are really in love doing this poem and i can feel it...............lovely poem.....thanks a lot.hope the world will fall in love...annd no more wars and famines.rebels and crimes.thank you.

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Mohammed Albalushi 21 March 2009

each line of ur poem reminds me how wnderfull poet ur, full of love poem

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Chitra - 22 March 2009

you are so full of love...you see it manifested in every little thing in life.. nice poem

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Blue Eyes 10 April 2009

a very touching poem, well done.

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Ali Ahmed 30 March 2009

very deep..... if someone understand. No words i have to comment on! ! !

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Kurt Behle 24 March 2009

I don't know if I should say something, Actually I don't know what to say that have not been said...Not that I'm speechless...Thumbs way up baby...Great work...10+! ! !

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Mimi Fakhira 23 March 2009

I see you're very good at expressing your feelings. Another beautiful work from you.10!

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u have brought out ur feelings in a good poetic form, ..... this poem has brought out my feelings too.

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