I Am Ready To Die For U Poem by roushan banu

I Am Ready To Die For U

Rating: 5.0


I'm ready to die for you
since you're in my heart
I can win over my death
You are my vision

I can't remain without thinking about you for a second

You are my heart
You are my vision

I can't bear to see a sweat dropp on your brow
I can't bear to see you in worries
I won't allow you to shed even a tear
I won't allow even your shadow to fall on earth

I have lost the key
after locking you in my heart............

{the above lines are few lines from a song(tamil song)
i love the lines from this songs }

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 05 February 2009

Brilliance in composition you have penned your thoughts so simple snd in eloquence........sweet it is...10/10

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Vinod Kumar 05 February 2009

Good Lines of dedicated love, thanks for sharing,10++

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 06 February 2009

Hello there Roushan and I too enjoyed those above mentioned lines. I thank you for your recent visit to my poem as well. Loyd

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Analou Pabalate 21 March 2009

true love really conquers all....

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anurag duggal 20 March 2009

Wonderful poem lovely write indeed :)

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 17 February 2009

Good morning poet and your words show us how the love of another can consume our every thought. I enjoyed, Loyd PS Thank you for recent reviews of my poetry as well, Loyd

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Eyan Desir 07 February 2009

i felt, that the poem was ok. hmm, i can tell u are a honest person

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ata khan 07 February 2009

Beautiful. I know, how it feels. These expressions portray a true desi female love. Lucky are those who have such lovers.10/10

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