ramesh rai

Gold Star - 11,601 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

My desire


Life is survived
till there is desire

I too have a desire
desire to travel across the world
to view the colors of life
to travel across the space
talk with moon and stars
to ask the nature
what made it so divine
to let the people of this world
you are a part of nature and
divinity exists in you too
to tell them
we all are travellers
to tell them
this world is an inn
we have to leave peacefully
we have to enjoy the journey
without hurting each other
as we travel in bus, train or in plane
we can not say before or after this life, and no one is confirmed about
but we must ensure
a peaceful and delightful journey
The Almighty is sending our all needs at every moment of our journey
with regards to all passengers of this journey.

Submitted: Saturday, July 06, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, July 17, 2013

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  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (7/25/2013 8:11:00 PM)

    a good write. we are all travelers we must ensure a peaceful and happy journey. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (7/25/2013 8:11:00 PM)

    a good write. we are all travelers we must ensure a peaceful and happy journey. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,446 Points Somanathan Iyer (7/23/2013 9:35:00 AM)

    We have to leave peacefully after living peacefully. Beautiful concern for harmony. enjoyed reading. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Passionate Reader (7/13/2013 8:39:00 AM)

    but we must ensure
    a peaceful and delightful journey

    A beautiful message! ! ! love your philosophical poems! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 603 Points Shahzia Batool (7/13/2013 6:28:00 AM)

    the analogy of the world being a temporary resting place and human beings as travellers is aptly presented! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sapna Agrawal (7/11/2013 3:58:00 AM)

    desire that set expectations..... nice frame (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,039 Points Hazel Durham (7/8/2013 10:06:00 AM)

    We have to make our journey, one to remember, to learn and love as much as we can!
    Superb write and very thought provoking! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (7/8/2013 5:28:00 AM)

    What a philosophical poem, we are all on the same road and we should look after each other. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (7/8/2013 5:26:00 AM)

    A lovely philosophical write. Life is a journey. Completing it with happiness and dignity is in our hands. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,688 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (7/7/2013 2:06:00 PM)

    Oh yes i totaly agree with how u say we r passengers n life's a journey, wow what a wondrful poem! Yes i already read dat fine shazia's poem n i tink comentd it too. Thanx 4 d phrase vandematram fellow indian uncle poet. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,302 Points Lyn Paul (7/7/2013 2:59:00 AM)

    What a beautiful journey you have set for your passengers. A great write. (Report) Reply

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