My Daughter! ! ! Poem by ramesh rai

My Daughter! ! !



I gazed at the sky
I saw a luminious object
coming down on earth
flapping its two wings

As it came closer
what I see

Wow! ! !
she is an angel
with love in her one hand
and peace in another

She stepped down on earth
without any interaction
she poured down on me
what she carried in her two hands
and stood folding infront of me

I realised
the rain of grace upon me

I asked, who are you?
she told, I am your love
I am your daughter
The Lord sent me to you

As a mere child
she caught my fore finger
of left hand and asked me
Papa! Papa!
come with me
I'd show you the Paradise

I played with her every smile

O' My daughter!
you always take my favour

After days toil
with my wearied and teared body
when I return to home
instantly you come forward
with a glass of water
my whole tiredness sunk into

You make me refreshed
with a cup of tea
enrapture my soul
with an eternal faith
to live in

When your MAA make me annoyed
you take my favour
without thinking good or bad

You characterise your womanliness
always stood beside the man
to protect him with her deep love
either he was Jesus or he was Hitler

Daughter comes on the earth
as an angel, to make this earth
a heaven, show us the paradise

Friday, March 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 28 March 2014

COMMENT BY ANNA PARKER Father, this is beautiful as a Africa rose, beautiful a dragon tear drop of pure gold, beautiful as a cool India breeze on a too hot day, as beautiful as a rainbow after ten decades of rain, as beautiful as a colorful butterflies that sit on a Sun shine rose. As beautiful as the Love you share with Ma and all us.The reflection of all our Hearts together, Kiss by God, and His Love for us.As beautiful as that.I Love you more everyday, Dad, My, Lord, know next to the Love, I have for him.

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Louis Rams 26 August 2014

an excellent write, and we do have similarities in our writings

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Ruma Chaudhuri 25 May 2014

Ohhh what a nice poem. I love to read it. I have also a poem Best friend about my daughter. But your poem is great. Nice thought and thanks for sharing it. Ruma

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Amitava Sur 15 April 2014

A beautiful affectionate relation between father and daughter is drawn here.... a serene relation! ! ! !

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Dinesan Madathil 02 April 2014

A tribute paid to a great daughter and the pleasant writing reads into all our minds, Rameshji

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Shahzia Batool 29 March 2014

This should be a pinned post for all to read Bhayya...blessed are the souls who value the relations like this!

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