My Country Bleeds Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

My Country Bleeds

Rating: 4.7


My country is bleeding to death,
Daily we mourn the dead and lay wreath
Could do absolutely nothing to prevent
Blasts and deaths daily occurrences as if there are no more event

Some people come on bike and strike with gun,
terrorist emerge all of sudden and shoot for the fun
People are caught in cross fire and go for the run
What a shame on earth? Are we happy under the sun?

Country’s existence and honor is at stake
Still there is no unity and people are not wake
No one thinks of humanity and survival is at sake
How to mourn death and celebrate the occasion with cake?

We expect many more such strikes if we remain discerned
People and country should have more concerns
Holy places are on hit list but who knows when?
Danger may be lurking from all over then

Enemies may strike when they are firmly placed in
outside danger may be less but more from within,
Keep them at bay and don’t let them assemble
Sacrifice will not go in vain if enemy is put in trouble

Rain water may flow on ground but blood will remain
When blood is mixed with water it will not go in drain
Don’t aggravate the situation by mere propaganda and refrain
Save country from dishonor and never complain

Asked not? What country has done for you or does?
Only offer self and it may serve purpose
Sacrifice is the only answer that lies with you
You survive or die.honour becomes due

Stop death game once for all and offer the peace best
Stop orgy of violence and unwanted or needless unrest
Come to the sense and deliver the rest
Bad phase will be over if we stand the test

Nothing has proved yet and enough is enough
Strike at the root and prove little tough
Let the enemy know, gun will match the gun
Pride and honor to be preserved and not made a fun

Will youth of today rise in arm and hunted enemy to be slained?
Salute to brave people and warning enemy not to strike again
Always ready to die by putting country first
Attempt to flush them as crisis has become worst




It is possible that you will be lost from memory
Country may be burdened more with worry
No one will remember who defended the honor
it may be by all sections including minor or major

It is not important how long did you live?
It only matter how you lived and what did you believe
So when it comes to defend the country?
You got to offer yourself and make the entry

Politicians always scrounge and people may laugh,
Words may be spoken but may not be that enough
Few rose petals may be offered by them and laid as wreath,
Tears too may be shed when stopped last breath,

What we need today is strong will power?
Not many building and no high rising towers
We should stand united and display strong will
Defeat the enemy designs and go for the kill

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

My country bleeds to death, my country is bleeding to death due to terrorrists attacks..... innocents are killed.. very good and painful write...10

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Radha Seth 15 August 2009

it saddens us all the time....10

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John Lyday 17 April 2009

Steadfast salute to patriotism and opposition to terrorism.

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another meanigful and excellent writing and thiswhat we need truly Not many building and high rising tower, All we need is strong will and heroes fewer

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Chand Shikari 07 July 2009

My country bleeds to death, Daily we mourn and lay wreath Could do nothing to prevent, Blast and death, no more event, .... it is sad very sad and daily wemourn the death oe heroes and innocent people... humanity is on eshame..thoughtless killings...10

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Louis Rams 05 December 2009

violence will always stick its head up like a snake, and it can also be cut off once it is seen. gr8t write a ten

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Rafique Farooqi 30 November 2009

Asked not? what country has done or does? Only offer self and it serves purpose, Sacrifice is answer that lies with you, You survive or die.Honor becomes due, Stop death game and offer peace best, Stop orgy of violence and needless unrest, come to the sense and deliver rest, bad phase will be over, good will be well said terrorism is condemned, in any form and at any place, by anyone, peace is global requirement

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bye bye... bye bye 20 October 2009

Not How long you lived but how you lived.... Very impressing, affectionate writing with deep commitment!

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 20 October 2009

great poem with a clear message...well done

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Maulin Shah 16 August 2009

it bothers us so much....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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