Missing Part Poem by Philip Mc Mahon

Missing Part

Rating: 5.0


Its only days now to the big day, Santa coming soon.
Christmas is at our doorstep and I should be over the moon.
My family is not complete were missing one of our parts
It feels like some one has reached in and stolen a piece of my heart.
My son is far away now, living out his dreams
While we are trying to survive without him its harder than it seams.
We are so proud of our boy, he has made us glow inside
But our hearts are broken, a part of us has died.
We will hold our three remaining children and show them all our love
Pray we will be back together soon with the help of god above.

Friday, July 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: missing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this when it was getting near Christmas and my son was in New Zealand working.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 10 September 2016

Love the title and a beautiful heartfelt write, with great rhythm and rhyming, thank you for sharing!

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Annette Aitken 29 July 2016

Thats a lovely heart felt piece, as you know we have to let them go so they will return again a fuller person. So happy your family in all back in the same country. Annette

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