Mid Day Moon Poem by Savita Tyagi

Mid Day Moon

Rating: 4.5


In mountains moon hangs
In clear blue sky past mid day.
Nature's charismatic tool -
A semicircle blotting paper to
Soak up the misery of who so ever
Cares to deposit it there.

Monday, October 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 03 October 2016

Miracle of nature identified and conceptualized in a beautiful verse form. Thanks for sharing.

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Savita Tyagi 06 October 2016

Thank you Ratnakar.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 03 October 2016

Moon whether it is in night or day time, is always capable of soothing minds. A deep profound meaning wrapped in a free verse. Thanks for sharing.

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Savita Tyagi 06 October 2016

Thanks for your comment.

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