Message Poem by Savita Tyagi

Message

Rating: 5.0


Man! O Man! Do not always nurture and protect me.
I am not just a rose delicate to be pruned and cared for.
In my bosom grow the wild flowers of sparkling beauty.
Each one wanting and needing its own habitat.
Do not over look their desire and strength
To face the fierce wind and rain for freedom
To smile and dance under breezy sunshine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Heathcote 17 August 2015

This is my kind of poetry small little gems that are like flowers.

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Tushar Ray 22 June 2015

A clear message for the freedom of those normally overlooked around us is presented in this beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing Savita.

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Daniel Brick 22 June 2015

What a wonderful message the flower/speaker delivers! The last line reveals her goal: to dance in the sunlight with complete freedom. And the man's fussing interferes with that freedom. But unexpressed is another message implied: I can do this on my own, I'm not only free, I'm independent. Your flower image neatly conveys this message of independence in human lives. The flower addressing the gardener can also be a growing child addressing a parent.

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Narendra Jaggi 21 June 2015

Strength is beauty, in its own way. May all of us be blessed with fertile habitats for the diverse flowers that live within us !

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Akhtar Jawad 21 June 2015

A lovely message from a confident woman, yes a woman is self sufficient...................10

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