Meteoroid Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Meteoroid

Rating: 5.0


The blazing fire piece
Blooming in the sky garden
like the twinkling stars
Far on the earthly dim ground
Let's enjoy soothing flowers


13.08.2020 Chattogram

Meteoroid
Friday, August 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: fire,star
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 14 August 2020

Scintillate the sky Like a new star Only to give Hopeful New world. Good hopeful poetry.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 14 August 2020

Love for nature - beautiful.

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M Asim Nehal 14 August 2020

Indeed they look fantastic provided they do not fall on earth and cause havoc. Nicely conceived and executed. Picture is aptly chosen.10+++

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 August 2020

Realms of realms! ! Beauty of the sky ar night. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 20 August 2020

This poem provides a pleasurable, beautiful display of fireworks, blooming afar.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 August 2020

The photograph you added is very captive. A 10+++++ Full Vote.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 August 2020

We, as kids loved to say: Falling star? Quick, make a wish! Then we did that. Lovely poem, dear Mahtab! Brilliant brevity, fascinating to read, thank you so much for sharing. A 10++++++++ Full Vote.

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Indira Renganathan 16 August 2020

of course we will enjoy...who will not? ...an enjoyable poem indeed 10++

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