Concrete Expectation Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE
Concrete Expectation
In long breaths expectations lead me to die
I want to take loan some times to omit sigh
Your love is one color in the coat of colorful life
The wings of heron flying on the village of blue sky
Endless youthful stream of Karnafully river and I
Live together in poisonous vapor of manufacturing dye
Dawn to dusk we're digging the pond of fate
Lucy quay of life closes all around the gate
In the bed of night coarse plaster captives us
Lingering expectation gland lives always detach
A great poem! My pleasure reading it time and again! I adore your style of penning! Keep it up!
Dawn to dusk we're digging the pond of fate Lucy quay of life closes all around the gate we are digging the pond of fate...... yes so true.. thank u dear Mahtab. tony
Lingering expectation gland lives always detach. Great poem. Congrats on the poem of the Day.
Awesome, Superb.....Poem, At the outset, Congrats for this honours POTD. This poem is a masterpiece of imageries, vocabulary and articulate writing. I quote a single line which lifted this poem to supreme height: Your love is one color in the coat of colorful life.......10+++++
Wow! Painted with fine painting strokes.... Dawn to dusk we're digging the pond of fate... Well done!
Beautiful poem. You deserve to be honoured dear Mahtab. Many congratulations! !
In the bed of night coarse plaster captives us Lingering expectation gland lives always detach /// beautiful poem penned; let it be rock
Concrete expectation when comes to life and concrete advancement when entangles with all then all are enjoying the life of happiness- superb
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Expectations cloud our judgement but working hard will bring us our rewards, an insightful and beautiful write!