Magical Love Poem by Indira Renganathan

Magical Love

Rating: 5.0

Thoughts should be like rainbow colours
Producing magical combinations
On an attire glittering with golden broiderie
That looks very much a poem of your elegance

I drew a rainbow of rainbow colours
And I quickly turned it upside down
As it would vanish away quietly soon
When I did so fell a few flecks of colours

I dabbed them all separately..words of love
I wrote along that liplike rainbow..wow..! !
Sprang forth your iridescent smiling mouth
Saying 'wow' as if accepting my words of love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 25 July 2023

A beautifully crafted poem. Enjoyed very much. Thanks.

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Iridescent smile, iridescent poem. Good.5*

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Denis Mair 12 August 2023

Writing finally got invited to be part of the magical mulligatawny stew. The rainbow is important and a certain person's smile is important, and writing can only grow if it joins in the loop of resonance.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 July 2023

A WOW! Poem certainly, Uplifting our hearts in a special way, the rainbow way. I have enjoyed this loveliest poem enormously. TFS, Mrs. Renganathan. This poem made my day. Thank YOU! TOP Marks 5 Stars Full

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 July 2023

Wonderful thoughts that give rise to love. So beautifully and tenderly expressed. Very heartwarming.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 July 2023

A fabulous poem... loved it dear madam

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Denis Mair 26 July 2023

If one can savor it one is already halfway to writing.

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