Lovely Future Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Lovely Future

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No one tries to fall
But it responds to call
Beautiful invite
For passion to ignite

The light path follows
And it certainly allows
To be felt at each other
One responds with smile either

The age does miracle
The invitation goes through smile
The easy and effective one
So far not shard by any one

Love is divine gift
Be firm and make no shift
Love her till end
Comfort her always as friend

Let her see you as beam
And work as team
Take her to safety
As graced by almighty

Let garden add new flower
With fragrance smell her
Make her feel at home
Always open arms to welcome

Nature may support
But some times may fall short
You make it worth and assure
She must find lovely future

Thursday, April 10, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 April 2014

Beautiful iNVITE passion to IGNITE, , FANTASTIC, WORDS, Hasmukh, NICE, VERY INVOLVING, , ! ! ! I Jawahar Gupta36 minutes ago I LOVE YOUR WHOLE POEM.! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 April 2014

Love it Misty Lawrence11 minutes ago Your poems are in a similar rhyme scheme as mine, Nice to read. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 April 2014

Good One Tuvako Mbeche10 minutes ago Like this

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 April 2014

No one tries to fall But it responds to call

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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