Her one killing look
Made my heart hook
Her one cute smile
Made me jump mile
Into ocean of love
Her one sweet word
Made me fly world
Her one beautiful move
Made my heart rove
Into ocean of love
Her one caring call
Made me forget all
Her one pure query
Made my heart quest
Into ocean of love
Her one heart beat
Made my heart beat
Her one helping hand
Made me sail sand
Into ocean of love
Her one painful tear
Made my heart tear
Her one silent promise
Made me also promise
I love you dear forever
WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This was just so plain and simple yet so heartfelt, sweet and romantic...........LOVE YOU FOREVER.............written with great end rhymes and rhythm...10
How beautiful she is, Kranthi, like this poem, like rhymes and rhythm of this poem. A wonderful love tribute.
another poem with rhymes and rhythm............a beautiful write.........
as carl says**** your english may not be the best. but your expression of love does. good write
Beautiful poem Kranti. Very well structured with apt, sweet sounding words. Very effective love poem
This is a beautifully expressed poem, Kranthi, and it attemps rhyming nobly, but because you are writing in a second or third language, your grammar and rhyming needs some help. I know it is very difficult to do so as well as a person who normally speaks English all of the time can do, though some of them even have problems with our language! I will look over your poem and offer some suggestions to you via messsage to improve your rhyming (some words do not rhyme with each other at all) and the way it is phrased (grammar is the problem) . Still, it is the sentiment expressed in this poem that make it a very appealing write. Carl.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I just have to ask who made you want to write that poem who did you write it for because who ever did is lucky to know you! ! ! ! ! ! AMAZING POEM! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !