Love Box Poem by Sivashanmugam Shanmugam

Love Box

Rating: 5.0


Happy to know that you are stepping,
Stepping in to my sweet home!
Sweet December brings dreams.
Prosperous life is leading with love.
Happiest moments may be engraved,
With gentle and soft in to my heart!
Getting love, like a breez in my soul.
Feelings of your clutch is melting me,
Hey, Even in this month too!
Get ready to start the next interesting,
Interesting game that we have very often!
I am filling my pearls in to the fabulous box
Dont close the box until the dawn!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 January 2010

‘…Feelings of your clutch is melting me…’ Will e’er remain open box…and let dawn never come…LOL! 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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, aryaindia 24 December 2009

No wonder Manohar Malgaonkar wrote 'A thousand lovers' so long ago. Now I see the truth..........arya

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Eyan Desir 20 December 2009

Nice title with a good contents well gone

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Sathyanarayana M V S 19 December 2009

Sir, There is a marked change in your approach. Higly evocative poem with beautiful lines. The last two lines speak a lot allegorically. Very nice work Sir.

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam

Sivashanmugam Shanmugam

Karur / Tamilnadu / India.
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