My Love Poem by Sivashanmugam Shanmugam

My Love

Rating: 5.0


one fine morning she is walking with me
her heart is in love im with in her hug..
she is open hearted and she is in clutch
crossed fourty nine but in glimpse so young
walking through the mighty juncle..
with lay her head on my shoulder
tall trees are line by the side
fragrance of the flowers on her
we feel cool water gurgled our feet
my lover touching the stream with joy
pleasant surprise in this spring
try to catch the lovely sprinkles..
we never forget that moon day
pray to come as every day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 11 June 2010

Nice and romantic… ‘pleasant surprise in this spring’ …Rituraj [King of seasons] bestows in bounty to poets like you…so unending spring for you Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Rachel Butler 30 October 2009

'Fragrance of the flowers on her' Rachel Ann Butler

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Obinna Eruchie 20 October 2009

It is a love piece, pleasant to read.

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam

Sivashanmugam Shanmugam

Karur / Tamilnadu / India.
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