Lost Poem by Unwritten Soul
Lost
We lost our words
Something has gone
Something unplanned
But who are we
To stop what we cant
Where's the warm greet
Only silent wash our feet
Draw a distance
Me...Away from you
The sign you point it
Nobody guilty
The broken occur naturally
Unintentionally
We lost our grip
like we are two ships
Lost in stormy seas
Wind drew destiny
Reach different harbour
Our lips silence sealed
We walk together but
In two different dimensions
At two different directions
Without a word left
Without any regret
Decision was made
As you want it
A while or Or..
Or maybe we lost it all?
You cant deny
Our life got infected
Bruises consume the strength
You hold me loosely
To lost me slowly
The soul ruptured
The spirit folded
It's all right
Promise me
Blooming smiles forever
Cheer a bud of flower
Make it eternal
Take your way
If that make u feel better
Time will flows like a river
And you will forget me later
Waves, pull me away
Send me to a new land
Where i cant make people hurt
Sweet little sacrifice
For me to you
You
Lost
Me
For your sake
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Hmm seems like many readers give sign not like to read this kind from me
lol...hey dont worry it's a writing....I'm not broken..: p
To be lost in a relationship is a terribly sad situation. What to say...What to do....How to fix.....To stay or leave. Another stunning write...10+
When we are lost, we have to calm down and know always where to go back home and respect our own life, Thank you Simone for always reading my work..appreciate that my dear
I read a couple of the poems you posted here...I really enjoyed them. Well, of course, I must admit some really did strike a chord. The poem is great; is depicts all the feelings one goes through after a break up, and eventually the distance, serenity, acceptance and sacrifice that go along with it. I rated it a 10!
a wonderful yet sad poem of the feeling's felt when things don't work out? ............well written US
Nobody guilty The broken occur naturally Unintentionally We lost our grip like we are two ships Lost in stormy seas Wind drew destiny Reach different harbour ************************ Take your way If that make u feel better Time will flows like a river And you will forget me later Waves, pull me away Send me to a new land Where i cant make people hurt.... these two stanza are mostly insightful having a deep relation to time, life and lost. As a whole this poem is beautiful and didactic. I appreciate this poem. Thanks for sharing.
Lost in a relationship is heartbreaking as the distance is like a ship on rough seas with no land in sight, you have written such a beautiful and insightful write!
Your kind soul is beautifully reflected in this pensive poem. Another great write!
This is terrific, Soul. I read this several times, and noticed the very last word in the first stanza. I now see it can be from to cant. A reading with this understanding adds a twinge of melancholy. A great work, Soul.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 4:28:01 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Great poem, life can be a torturous path but in time all things become apparent.
Thanks Chris, i almost not have in my mind and forget that i wrote this poem.. :)