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Lost From Your Grasp

Remember me?
In your promise
A little warm castle
Made of sweet time
Built for me to live
Between your hands
And i forever at the center
Protected as long as i still here
Remember those promise dear?

I know that it maybe NO,
But i still thankful
I was just the snowy ice
That never felt so warm before
And you shared me once to let me know
Changed, melted my soul as the water flow
Through your loosen fingers like the opened windows
You let me go
Gone and disappeared
Stolen by the cold air
By the ropes of sunlight hair

Remember you?
How cant I?
Because I promised once
Even though I've been forgotten
I still around you to support anytime
And when clouds sending me back, i returned
Fallen and buried underneath your garden

I know that you maybe don't know
The flowers in your jars that bloom
Because of me give my life into them
Water, my strength in them
So you still have me
Your eyes can't see me
But i am here
Though the last promise
Have been forgotten
And I still here
Here

Just I cant be yours
To live in your grasp
Just not as what in your promise
But here i am again
Forgiving

Submitted: Monday, August 12, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, August 27, 2013


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Just doodling words and the image of ice-water-air came in..and i composed it as a story where a hand once promise to take care snow and never let go but it never a good happy ending...its like we should not take something for granted...and for us, no matter we are having a broken promises, sending prayers for all person and forgive from all past make things still alive in beautiful. Just want to live in harmony...so that's what i got after doodling the words randomly...hahahah dont laugh okay hahaha_Soul

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  • Gary Kedron (8/28/2013 7:15:00 PM)

    beautiful poetry... still searching for myself to be able to do so.... nice to read in others words to describe oneself feels... emotions are universal....

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  • Heather Wilkins (8/26/2013 9:03:00 PM)

    beautiful write enjoyed the read

  • Diane Hine (8/19/2013 8:34:00 PM)

    Brilliant analogy, one of your best.

  • Paul Brookes (8/17/2013 3:56:00 AM)

    Ah forgiveness no easy task I sometimes struggle with the concept especially those who have betrayed but you're right, does no good to hold a grudge it only poisons from within Enjoy your poem as always BB : O)

  • Heather Wilkins (8/14/2013 5:42:00 PM)

    forgiveness is one of the keys to life it does no good to hold on to grudges. they just make for unhappy people. better to let it go and forget. enjoyed

  • Patti Masterman (8/14/2013 5:21:00 PM)

    I enjoy your poet notes as much as the poem, I think. Interesting to see how a mind
    arrives at that certain point and what then comes from the muse.. :)

  • Valerie Dohren (8/14/2013 3:25:00 PM)

    It has been said that 'to err is human, to forgive, divine' - beautiful Soul, great sentiment.

  • Harindhar Reddy (8/14/2013 11:19:00 AM)

    good poem soul. we enjoy yr poetry

  • Lucifera Santez (8/14/2013 10:00:00 AM)

    its phnomenol, a 10 for it.
    loved reading it.
    But here i am again
    Forgiving
    amazing lines.
    please read some of mine.
    :)

  • Siyabonga a Nxumalo (8/14/2013 9:27:00 AM)

    Wow! .. This poem is superb my friend, it melts the heart of the reader.
    Siya_! !

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