Light In The Chamber Poem by Unwritten Soul

Light In The Chamber

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Light in the chamber
Glass, you keep it inside
Not as fortress from letting it brighten the dark
But your transparency magnify its power to cross the night

So do my love i carry in me
Here my beloved friends, my remedy
You magnify my love across the world
Signifying peace is here as our hands hold

If I am the light
You are the magnifying chamber
My lovers..

Light In The Chamber
Thursday, July 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Light in a chamber is a tribute to all my friends here and along my lifetime. It is about my observation that lamp need glass to bring more power in lighting not to hold light to stay inside..the concave shape of bulb will scatter light better, so my true friends here...you are magnifying true me. As this is written to tribute for you, on my birthday..i want to wish you. Thanks for always supporting me..love you all across what boundaries divide us no matter religion, race, nationality, skin colour, opinion, language...your heart are the glass that protect candle from gone by the wind, magnify even more

here i specifically want to thank to friends here:
I tried to compile whole name from i started writing here until now
it may takes time, no preferences to each other, i love all of you..
i will updated it time by time, so if you cant find yours here...i
will do later..i have to trace back all my great 'hearties' here since 2010!

Adam reed (my first reader) , Ahmad Khaled, Whispering Rose, Vipin Poothorans, Terrence George Craddock, Hans VR, Saadat Tahir, Sally plumb plumb, Sally Walterean, Rekha Mandagere, Tom billsborough, Christopher Tye, Ellias, Mohammed maleki, Mohammad Ali, Susan Williams, Songfromsea, M.J. Lemon, Syed Aabid, Rohit Sharma, Shadow Girl, mr giddling) , Kevin Carney, Negar, Negin, Sunprincess, Richard Wlodarski, Frank Davis Sr, Wabi Sabi, Joshua Guillory, Valeri Dohren, S.Zaynub Kamoonpuri, Adilson Pinto, Jazib kamalvi, Rebecca Navarre, Hazel Durham, Genova maa, Saadat Tahir, Simone Inez Hariman, payal, Michael Mcfarland, Farzad, Cheryl Tutaan, Dr tony, Geetha jayakumar, Fabrizio, Sekharan pookat, Hosein Az, Hosein Bahr, Nader Baheri, Annete Aikin, Muhizatul Reza, Mihaela Pirjol, E.K.L, Robbert Murray Smith, Diane hine, Jr Cuyam, Kumarmani Mahakul, Mohammed Asim Nehal, Vishal Sharma, Sweta, Xelam kan, Farah Illyas, kamellokenol, ramesh rai, heather wilkin, Howard, Neela Nath, Paul Brookes, Erica Morgan, Danny Draper, Elena Sandu, jenie Franksay, suvi Sharma, Dinesh Nair, rain, kee Thampi, Shazia batool, David wood, Yasmin Khan, Ambrosia, Robert Wynn, Siyabonga A Nxumalo, Ace of Belack heart, captain cur, wahab abdul, terry oleary, Jahan zeb, Eldritch Mungo, Kanav justa, Kevin patrick, Chandra Thiagarajan, RK dass, Scotty Dog, Jinal Oswal, Lyn paul, Mirna Morgan, Guess who, abdallah, Colin Bradley, Subodh pandey, Spiritual seeker, Nassire Ghadire, Ketan Hukare, Valsa george, Ruby Honeytip, Luscious larry, Tony Karas, Lasoaphia Quxazs, Midnight voice, Kelvin Owasu, Kelly seale, Saeed jan, Ken E hall, Allemagne Ro? mann, hamid negah, sina farajzadeh, Ekaterina, Aditi Khandelawal, Sam S slait, Nurain Ali-balogun kaila george, Kasia Fedyk, Elena Sandu, Nimal Dununhingga, Dave walker, Eric cockrell, Sharad Juneja, Harindhar reddy, Willie walker, Omar jabak, Cosmic dreamer, Anita trivedi, Bernard snyder, Crimson love, Hosny Soliman, Pranab Chakraborty, Menime Soul'd' Ugliloner, muhammad muzammil, Stefanie Fontker, Romeo Della valle, Miroslava Odalovic, gordon, naida supnet, Aranthabailu Ummar, Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK, Eyan desir, Denise Bekker, kieran, kari alexander, mehta Hsamukh, Roshan roy....to be added..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 15 July 2017

Thank you for once again broadening my horizon. I never before looked at the glass bowl surrounding a light bulb with any curiosity at all- well, you just woke me up, Soul. I have got to be much more like you and SEE what is really going on with these everyday items. Great and lasting image, my friend. If I am the light You are the magnifying chamber- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - You, Soul, are both! ! ! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Unwritten Soul 21 July 2017

But Susan, you and other friends are the ones that keep me revived...and to have all of you is something beautiful to keep in life, no what great friends are irreplaceable, and l love them.. Thanks for always stand strong/weak with me :)

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Sekharan Pookkat 07 November 2017

great lover of words magnifies soul as a token of birthday gift to one and all who read the poems- my ten###

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Fabrizio Frosini 17 October 2017

thank you so much, dear Soul! Cheers

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Richard Wlodarski 23 August 2017

Soul, there is a tradition in various parts of the world in which the birthday person doesn't receive gifts, but rather, gives them to his/her friends. I see that you are part of that tradition. In addition to your friendship, you have given us these two gifts. Firstly, this beautiful heart-felt poem which speaks multitudes. And secondly, acknowledgement of our friendships. I am honoured and humbled to be included in this circle of poets who are so gifted and compassionate. May the circle never be broken! And may we all continue to share our poems with each other and provide support and encouragement. May you forever remain blessed, Soul. You are truly one of a kind!

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Unwritten Soul 23 August 2017

Here there is no tradition like dear, at least so far as i observed... it just i think birthday is a anniversary of we having first day in this life, this dimension...so supposedly we should be thankful to God, parents who raised us and whoever make us stronger person and make our life so beautiful...when i am thinking of that, i feel that i should give express my thankful and giving my heart out to each person that comes along to my life journey and polished me to be better day by day...And when i wrote down i might missed someone but i dont mean it, sorry for i cant put it here...But to my greatest companion now and past, thanks for everything...your name all written on my heart's wall... :) Thanks Richard for being my good friend :)

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Adilson Pinto 06 August 2017

You are really deeply, friend of all of us! ! ! You are the light we have here dear! Your heart is immense and beautiful! Thank you dear poet for your existence!

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Unwritten Soul 07 August 2017

Everybody is a light and we are just amplifying each other light so what we can get is brightness! thank you dear for your words, and thank you also for be part of my life as friend that i never see but keep giving me strong hugs from far :) i do appreciate all of you. God knows!

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Jazib Kamalvi 26 July 2017

What a nice energy enhancing poem. The conservation law has been left far behind. Thank you very much,

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Unwritten Soul 26 July 2017

Thank your for your beautiful comment dear Jazib... :)

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