Listen To The Rain Poem by Unwritten Soul

Listen To The Rain

Rating: 4.6


As the leaves swayed by the wind hands
My feeling strongly catch secret sense
There was something in the wind
Calling for the rain...to fall
Wonderful sky with colors change
Sometimes cloudy with pain
Drain all in tearful rain
But now listen...
Listen to the rain
do you listen to the rain?
it tells a story...

'When u meet a friend
Appreciate them, love them
Like me love to earth...
We are far apart but
We remember each other
Either in joy or hard
We remain together'

The last drop
The rain stopped,
There was a rainbow drawn
Proudly high in the blue sky
Expressing a nice feeling
Defined by the rain and earth
Of the true friendship

Everytime the wind kiss on my face
It reminds me to the rain
Evertime the wind touching my hair
Feeling lucky budding in my vein
This is just a nice feeling
Possibly the same way
like earth and rain felt
and this is...
this is because of u my friend
We did creating our own rainbow
Forever drawn in our hearts
cant be seen but can be felt
Safe in our red heart

'when u meet a friend
appreciate them, love them
like me love to earth...
we are far apart but
we remember each other'
...a true word from rain
This memory will remain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefanie Fontker 28 September 2011

So beautiful. The rain is beautiful, and so symbolic. I love the humanity you express in your poetry, it's so pure and beautiful.

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Jacqui Broad 26 October 2011

Oh, this touched my soul. Shuddering from the pain of a breakup. Crying from loss. But, one shouldn't cry because it's over, one should smile because it happened...

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Kaitlin Schmidt 28 December 2011

I loved your imagery, pictures were just appearing in my head right and left. Very beautiful!

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Gina Albiek 30 December 2011

It's so touching and a dramatic sensitive one, realy enjoyed reading it :)

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Allemagne Roßmann 15 September 2012

Rain pirouetted very well in the potholes of life, pitter-pattered in the minds of readers-who does not want rain? Men always longs for monsoon and only women remain snowy cold hard-iced smoky winter...enjoyed..

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 March 2020

The last drop The rain stopped, There was a rainbow drawn Proudly high in the blue sky Expressing a nice feeling Defined by the rain and earth Of the true friendship...../// romantically described; beautifully penned, I enjoyed here on the ground of memory on the lap of heart the drop of rain will remind your letter which you gave in springtime by the course of time I opened in rainy season as if the rain drop made me wet with your togetherness.........o dear

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 July 2018

'when u meet a friend appreciate them, love them like me love to earth... we are far apart but we remember each other' ...a true word from rain This memory will remain..........this is what rain tells us through your pen. Though the earth and rain are far apart yet their love is true and deep. They remember each other. Nice imaginary. A beautiful metaphorical poem shared amazingly.10

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Hazel Durham 20 May 2017

A beautifully written poem with great imagery and inspired lines!

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Christopher Tye 26 August 2016

Wonderful poem and so beautifully written, good friends are the lifeblood of a good life lived.

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Muhammad Ali 24 August 2016

beautiful song of friendship. very nice poem.

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