we loved the way God utter his sweet words to me
and he touched my life and again I loved him
She is with me not to mourn without a sadness
We loved here again to live with sea
and we touched his soul to find love
and not to share this rain
when I find her she will be with rain
and corner of this coast I find farm full of fish to catch
corner of my life
and just to reach, she tell me we live here to share these wealth
Waiting for the same breeze!
All this music,
the joy we play
a beauteous girl
she my be a soul of sea
felt us to keep this may be for us,
What is really a truth of touch
a sin not to enjoy here
Catch a fish to eat and to rest here to find life
Even if We find nothing around the coast where, they spoil there life
Still I enjoy
Their tenderness and juicy smell...
Ok i can coment once more, i hope it lasts. This is a lovely poem on the sea, unique! So nice to read u again.
Somehow, this poem reminded me of Hugo's The Toilers Of The Sea, which I had read long back. May be due to the all-pervading smell of sea in it. Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece.
A Beautiful poem on sea. From far the sea looks so beautiful and many poets have portrayed the beautiful description of sea. But from near, the sea as well as those who survive on its wealth is quite different. Loved the way you presented it.
To me, this sounds like a sea of wandering thoughts or maybe something for readers to reread! Thanks for sharing, Thampi KEE!
A nice elaborate write on sea with various facets of it. Thanks for sgaring
Nice narration about sea. High speculation and beautifully envisioned. Many thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Life of poor fishermen who live on the sea shore is never sweet as we imagine! They have a sad tale to tell, though we enjoy the sea as casual visitors or tourists! A nice write on the sea!