A Heavenly Story Poem by Thampi KEE

A Heavenly Story

Rating: 4.6


I can see through your eyes
A heaven now and holy love will flow
no one can see you now
not awaits the dark side of you,


they say not a clown
the girl she looks not a cute
I guess they are not mad like me
just a stranger
look a friend in this heaven

I never say no
you know I never make jokes
we made it now
helen, the heaven you makes here

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetima Baruah Sarma 19 March 2011

Beautiful one with a nice title.

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Ezna Stephna 26 March 2011

Superb...... lovely poem with beautiful words used in line.......great.

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Sayeed Abubakar 21 April 2011

Fantastic. Superb. Discovering divine love demands a divine mind.

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Kesav Easwaran 12 May 2011

good read Thampi...thanks for sharing

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Hribhu Dey 15 May 2011

Hey dear I was into a world of real love...beautifully written.....ENJOYED READING...RHYTHMIC AND GOOD PACE PLZ READ MY POEM 'play and win' AND LEAVE A COMMENT PLZ, THANKS

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Marydel Cranzo 04 May 2015

well done, sir! , nice poem.

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Marydel Cranzo 04 May 2015

wonderful composition :)

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 02 August 2012

datz...........z..... actually like a suspense love story....................

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Lawrence H 20 March 2012

Kee, Your poem is good, but still unsure what are you trying to portray about heavenly story?

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Miriam Maia Padua 02 November 2011

you write so well... hope to read your new poems soon... do write new poems..your readers are waiting, I know..

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