Life Is A Dance In The Rain Poem by Cristina Teodor

Life Is A Dance In The Rain

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It's raining, it's quiet, only i can hear the rain,
Freshness of air is invading my breath,
The echo of drops falling, the purity of the sky,
It's giving me peace and relieves my pain.

Sky get open and crying,
Its tears are falling down to us,
To caress our faces with its drops,
To embrace our hearts with the mistery of life.

I want to embrace the rain,
And feel the drops falling on my face,
I want the rain to wash away my sorrows,
And let my fears run away.

Don't be afraid of rain, we are just two souls dancing,
Dance with me following the rhithm of rain,
Let the rain to make our love magic,
Let life to flow in its misterious way.

I am listening the rain and enjoy its greatness,
I want to catch every dropp of rain,
I want to dance with you in this magic landscape,
I want to live and relive this moment again and again.

Enjoy life, live fully every moment you can,
Do not waste those exciting moments,
Come with me and let's dance,
Life is a dance in the rain.

Tuesday, May 24, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: dance,dancing,life,rain,rain drops
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yoseph Lupu 30 September 2012

yes, life is a dance in the rain, even if it rains in Meine. even if it shines in a poetry lines!

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 26 December 2014

Enjoy life, live fully every moment you can, Do not waste those exciting moments, Come with me and let's dance, Life is a dance in the rain. Beautifully done poem with real feelings of dance in rain.I enjoyed it a lot.Well expressed.Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 01 June 2011

Cristina at her best. 'sky get open........mistery of life', shows the talent. Beautifully penned. drain in the rain. dance not, alone. cherish to partner in your waltz. great write. Narayanan.R

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Unwritten Soul 19 September 2011

Just like me, rain is so inspiring...and it pour some magic drops into your mind to write something like this... I love this part: 'I want to embrace the rain, And feel the drops falling on my face, I want the rain to wash away my sorrows, And let my fears run away'...the positivity is greatly bold! keep it up Cristina_Unwritten Soul

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 August 2019

Enjoy life, live fully every moment you can, Do not waste those exciting moments, Come with me and let's dance, Life is a dance in the rain. //// penned beautiful poem; thanks for sharing

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Dominic Windram 03 August 2019

Beautiful poem...tinged with Romanticism!

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Dev Anand 03 August 2016

The very title is so very poetic and naturally the whole poem. thank you

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Howard Savage 21 January 2016

The Sky Get Open and Cry, Great metaphor.

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 January 2016

Enjoy life, live fully every moment you can, Do not waste those exciting moments, Come with me and let's dance, Life is a dance in the rain. Such a wonderful and very positive attitude.... marvelous. thank you very much. dancing along the nature only to hug all that beauty and drink in till one is satisfied. thank you very much for this poem. tony

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