Cristina Teodor

Rookie - 24 Points (18.11.1973 / Romania)

Magic Lies In Silence Of Grass And In Your Voice - Poem by Cristina Teodor

I am barefoot walking in the grass of morning,
The dew drops are comforting my feet,
I felt relieved by my stress and grief,
When i heard your voice in the grass rustling.

I lie down on grass and i could feel its silence,
I close my eyes and i enjoyed your voice,
The smell of grass was taken on the wings of wind,
Magic lies in silence of grass and in your voice.

Is amazing how much miracle stays in a blade of grass,
Opening my eyes i saw above the sky,
There was your face among the clouds smiling,
I had the feeling that i want to hug the sky.

I'm gonna miss you all the days of life,
And even when death will take my last breath,
Last thing i'll do passing to eternity,
I'm gonna miss you.

Winter will come, grass will fall asleep,
I 'll not hear the grass rustling anymore,
Only my memories with you will be always alive,
Rustling in my mind as grass did.


Comments about Magic Lies In Silence Of Grass And In Your Voice by Cristina Teodor

  • Bernard Snyder Bernard Snyder (8/3/2016 11:00:00 PM)


    This poem is really beautiful. This should be 'poem of the year! ! Impressive! (Report) Reply

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  • Amar Agarwala Amar Agarwala (8/3/2016 7:18:00 PM)


    A wonderfully worded poem by Christina. An apt selection for being the poem of the day. The poet deserves every praise for this beautiful work of hers. Congratulations for being selected as poet of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (8/3/2016 2:06:00 PM)


    Congrats for the POTD honor for this beautiful poem, Thanks for sharing..10 (Report) Reply

  • Unnikrishnan E S (8/3/2016 12:56:00 PM)


    Hi Tina,
    Congratulations on being selected Poet of the Day.
    Memories with you will be always alive
    Rustling in my mind as grass did

    Beautiful poem Enjoyed reading.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (8/3/2016 11:06:00 AM)


    Excellent choice for Poem of the day. Wonderful work, Cristina! (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis Edward Kofi Louis (8/3/2016 11:05:00 AM)


    'Rustling in my mind as the grass did'. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Ratnakar Mandlik (8/3/2016 9:18:00 AM)


    The smell of grass was taken on the wings of wind,
    Magic lies in silence of grass and in your voice.
    Wonderful imagery and reflection of impressions. Heartiest Congrats on that count as also on member poet of the Day. (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (8/3/2016 4:28:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem. A pleasure to read. Congratulations for being poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee Jasbir Chatterjee (8/3/2016 3:42:00 AM)


    beautiful poem...congrats on being poet of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak Bharati Nayak (8/3/2016 2:55:00 AM)


    Winter will come grass will fall asleep
    I 'll not hear the grass rustling anymore
    Only my memories with you will be always alive
    Rustling in my mindas grass did.- - - - -An excellent piece of writing on love, pure and eternal. (Report) Reply

  • Tom Billsborough (8/3/2016 2:13:00 AM)


    A haunting piece. I liked the ideas and images very much. Well done on your Poem of the Day.
    Tom Billsborough (Report) Reply

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage Jayatissa K. Liyanage (8/3/2016 12:56:00 AM)


    A dip in romance and exhilaration, to muse over. Congrats for being the PoD. X (Report) Reply

  • Mohammad Ahmadizadeh Mohammad Ahmadizadeh (8/3/2016 12:31:00 AM)


    Wonderful piece. Respect to the beautiful feelings of poet. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2016 6:01:00 PM)


    nice one...beautiful..10


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    So I chose
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    So you make the rest as surprise (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 21, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 22, 2011


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