Jesus James Llorico


Life (Haiku) - Poem by Jesus James Llorico

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Death felt in high winds
Life's travel in sudden shift
No one can stop it...


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  • Rookie - 0 Points Geetima Baruah Sarma (10/6/2013 5:34:00 AM)

    Excellent! Death, a harsh reality well defined. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 8 Points Sj Holland (8/23/2013 9:45:00 PM)

    Yes, it comes swiftly, in the end, no matter how slowly it approaches. I imagine it is like a high wind that sweeps us away, and we are helpless as we leave. Nice Haiku. Distills what can seem complicated to many. Love that 5/7/5 and the succinctness of this poetic format. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,761 Points Heather Wilkins (6/6/2013 10:08:00 AM)

    this is an excellent haiku with so much truth (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Zubiya Surti (5/28/2013 10:14:00 AM)

    thank you so much.it is wonderful! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 25, 2013


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