Life (Haiku) Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

Life (Haiku)

Rating: 3.5


Death felt in high winds
Life's travel in sudden shift
No one can stop it...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetima Baruah Sarma 06 October 2013

Excellent! Death, a harsh reality well defined.

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Sj Holland 23 August 2013

Yes, it comes swiftly, in the end, no matter how slowly it approaches. I imagine it is like a high wind that sweeps us away, and we are helpless as we leave. Nice Haiku. Distills what can seem complicated to many. Love that 5/7/5 and the succinctness of this poetic format.

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Heather Wilkins 06 June 2013

this is an excellent haiku with so much truth

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Zubiya Surti 28 May 2013

thank you so much.it is wonderful!

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