Jesus James Llorico


Clear Blue Sky


Oh! It feels so nice to watch
This crystal clear blue sky
As my heart seems up a notch
To see a view this high...

This moment I'd like to see
Feeling refreshed anew
A time I most want it be
To gaze this sky with you...

In dreams I hope you will come
So I can tell you why
Of how deep in love I am
With you my dearest one...

As you look up in the sky
And if it makes you smile
Same I see here with my eyes
Though far, a thousand miles!

Submitted: Tuesday, July 23, 2013
Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Clear Blue Sky by Jesus James Llorico )

  • Rookie - 0 Points Geetima Baruah Sarma (10/3/2013 1:10:00 AM)

    Wonderful poetry...it was really a pleasure reading it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (8/6/2013 8:48:00 AM)

    Love this song of love. I relate to it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,898 Points Hazel Durham (7/28/2013 3:48:00 PM)

    Beautiful write with a desire to see your loved one to look together at the clear blue sky only though you're so far apart! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Sj Holland (7/27/2013 9:33:00 PM)

    Far apart, but together in the heart, and seeing the same stars, though miles apart. Very easy to understand and appreciate this verse. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,226 Points Ramesh Rai (7/27/2013 1:42:00 AM)

    As you look up in the sky
    And if it makes you smile
    Same I see here with my eyes
    Though far, a thousand miles!
    an eloquent and beautiful write
    10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (7/26/2013 12:34:00 AM)

    combine nature and love into a single entity is a wonderful thing and you very well describe it
    a beautiful poem to read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Indranil Bhaduri (7/23/2013 11:48:00 PM)

    What a wonderful piece of poetry. Loved it Sir. Takes us back to watch the clear sky and long for our loved ones. (Report) Reply

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