Clear Blue Sky Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

Clear Blue Sky

Rating: 4.4


Oh! It feels so nice to watch
This crystal clear blue sky
As my heart seems up a notch
To see a view this high...

This moment I'd like to see
Feeling refreshed anew
A time I most want it be
To gaze this sky with you...

In dreams I hope you will come
So I can tell you why
Of how deep in love I am
With you my dearest one...

As you look up in the sky
And if it makes you smile
Same I see here with my eyes
Though far, a thousand miles!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adheez Van Der Beanthz 26 July 2013

combine nature and love into a single entity is a wonderful thing and you very well describe it a beautiful poem to read

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Ramesh Rai 27 July 2013

As you look up in the sky And if it makes you smile Same I see here with my eyes Though far, a thousand miles! an eloquent and beautiful write 10+++

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Sj Holland 27 July 2013

Far apart, but together in the heart, and seeing the same stars, though miles apart. Very easy to understand and appreciate this verse.

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Hazel Durham 28 July 2013

Beautiful write with a desire to see your loved one to look together at the clear blue sky only though you're so far apart!

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R.j. Wynn 06 August 2013

Love this song of love. I relate to it.

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Lovely lines loaded with love and inspiration! !

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 05 July 2018

Nice write Jesus, As you look up in the sky And if it makes you smile Same I see here with my eyes Though far, a thousand miles! Nicely articulated JD...I vote 10+++

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Chinedu Dike 27 June 2018

Well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. Beautiful poem written in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 October 2016

Like gazing at the sky, my love for you has no boundaries. Nice write!

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Wilma De Guzman 29 July 2016

Beautifuly written and expressed clearly!

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