Jesus James Llorico


Clear Blue Sky - Poem by Jesus James Llorico

Oh! It feels so nice to watch
This crystal clear blue sky
As my heart seems up a notch
To see a view this high...

This moment I'd like to see
Feeling refreshed anew
A time I most want it be
To gaze this sky with you...

In dreams I hope you will come
So I can tell you why
Of how deep in love I am
With you my dearest one...

As you look up in the sky
And if it makes you smile
Same I see here with my eyes
Though far, a thousand miles!


Comments about Clear Blue Sky by Jesus James Llorico

  • Wilma De Guzman (7/29/2016 4:15:00 AM)


    Beautifuly written and expressed clearly! (Report) Reply

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  • Jr Cuyam Jr Cuyam (4/1/2016 12:54:00 AM)


    Very pleasant to read and a wonderful piece sir! (Report) Reply

  • Allotey Abossey (1/7/2016 8:48:00 AM)


    You tell of love in an amazing manner. I enjoyed the flow and graduations. Good work my friend. God bless you. I kindly invite you to read my poem: STEALING GLANCES (Report) Reply

  • Howard Savage (12/30/2015 6:01:00 AM)


    For to be with out Love is a serious form of Poverty. Great arrangement. (Report) Reply

  • Aarzoo Mehek Aarzoo Mehek (12/26/2015 10:50:00 AM)


    A yearning heart can express the lost love in a beautiful way. Very touchy poem, my compliments and Plus Ten for sensitive and expressive piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • Niken Kusuma Wardani Niken Kusuma Wardani (12/25/2015 11:45:00 PM)


    Sometimes we share the love through the beauty of the nature, this is one of them, beatiful (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis Edward Kofi Louis (12/25/2015 4:18:00 AM)


    The display of nature! With the muse of life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Amaan Zaidi Amaan Zaidi (12/22/2015 2:54:00 PM)


    It's a lovely poem. Simple and elegant! (Report) Reply

  • G. Akanji Olaniyi G. Akanji Olaniyi (11/12/2015 7:22:00 AM)


    Good rhyming poems are often not easy to come about....However, this is one of those rare occasions! tfs! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee Jasbir Chatterjee (7/14/2015 3:35:00 AM)


    Hoping, thinking, dreaming, and yearning...this is something only poets can do... (Report) Reply

  • Geetima Baruah Sarma (10/3/2013 1:10:00 AM)


    Wonderful poetry...it was really a pleasure reading it! (Report) Reply

  • R.j. Wynn (8/6/2013 8:48:00 AM)


    Love this song of love. I relate to it. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham Hazel Durham (7/28/2013 3:48:00 PM)


    Beautiful write with a desire to see your loved one to look together at the clear blue sky only though you're so far apart! (Report) Reply

  • Sj Holland Sj Holland (7/27/2013 9:33:00 PM)


    Far apart, but together in the heart, and seeing the same stars, though miles apart. Very easy to understand and appreciate this verse. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (7/27/2013 1:42:00 AM)


    As you look up in the sky
    And if it makes you smile
    Same I see here with my eyes
    Though far, a thousand miles!
    an eloquent and beautiful write
    10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Adheez Van Der Beanthz (7/26/2013 12:34:00 AM)


    combine nature and love into a single entity is a wonderful thing and you very well describe it
    a beautiful poem to read (Report) Reply

  • Indranil Bhaduri Indranil Bhaduri (7/23/2013 11:48:00 PM)


    What a wonderful piece of poetry. Loved it Sir. Takes us back to watch the clear sky and long for our loved ones. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013


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