Clouds (Haiku) Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

Clouds (Haiku)

Rating: 4.9


The clouds passing by
Carried my past in silence
To another time...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 23 August 2013

wonderful composition!

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Heather Wilkins 23 August 2013

excellent poem enjoyed

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Hazel Durham 23 August 2013

Memories of the past. Beautiful write!

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 26 August 2013

beautiful poem thanks for sharing

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Geetima Baruah Sarma 01 October 2013

A lovely haiku, enjoyed it!

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 August 2018

carrying my past in silence....... if it were never to come again, it would have been better. most of us carry our past within us......... we shall live in the present...... tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2018

The clouds passing by Carried my past in silence.........an impressive expression with memories of past in silence. A beautiful poem in concise which says much. Thanks for sharing.

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Marvin Brato 07 December 2017

Meaningful thought...to reminisce the past!

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Bharati Nayak 05 October 2016

So sweet and meaningful!

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Short on words but not on significance. Well done!

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