Life (Naani Poetry) Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico
Life (Naani Poetry)
'When I was young
I'm clueless on love and pain
now I'm old, it's hard and sad
to live life and understand.'
Friday, February 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle
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Cynthia Buhain-baello
20 February 2016
Very nice Naani poem in 25 syllables - but it has to be four lines only. I suggest you keep the line Now I'm old, it's hard and sad as one sentence/phrase.
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4/26/2024 7:33:18 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Thank you for a very nice comment ma'm and you're right, I forgot, it's a four line poetry.