<≪≪Let The Light Be Filled! ≫≫≫ Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

<≪≪Let The Light Be Filled! ≫≫≫

Rating: 2.2


Like a glow-worm of blue night
Let dreams wink as a divine boon
O'er my gloomy life in this full moon
To strew my lorn path with golden light
For I shall sing my morn song in tune

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neetha Sasidharan 25 November 2011

wow! a meaningful poem.

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Unwritten Soul 25 November 2011

Blown away with this romantic hope poem, even it sounds a bit restless and dark at last line but i know the real meaning is highly than any words can imagine...it never makes moonlight lose the light when you sad at night because it will still tell you to smile always, like it moon smile tonight hahahaha..blue moon, blue night and golden light WOW what expressive words you made here..i like them :) _Unwritten Soul

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Dead Leaf 25 November 2011

None could find my tears as they were like a sea. Sometimes me too feel the same! ! ! ! excellent poem...

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Cristina Teodor 02 December 2011

Love seen like a light that filled in the sight of soul.Nice poem..Cristina Teodor

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Sreelekshmi Pillai 19 June 2013

a beautiful poem, good write..

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Shivani Gupta 16 December 2012

beautifuly written! !

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Valsa George 21 August 2012

Excellent write! ! Fantasy in capsule form ! !

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Roong S 16 July 2012

Excellent! Very good write

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Shahzia Batool 18 May 2012

the artistry shows through the lines, , , n by a little effort you could have given it a definite form of a sonnet.... but it's fine, , , since a poem can't be written on gun-point, , , it follows its impulsive drive from somewhere inside...the poem comprises many beautiful lines...

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