Jack Poem by Poppi Sykes

Jack

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My friend, he is missing
For how long I do not know
I just don't understand it
How can you feel so low

I wish I could help you
Why did you let go
I think it's selfish
You did not let it show

I want to go to the lake
Here is where I'll take the blow
This was where we last sat
I promise to take it slow

I didn't know whether to believe
I thought the lake was shallow
I was wrong to judge
I couldn't see what was below

I'll remember when it rippled
I couldn't see the flow
Now I feel the cold
It's harsh to swallow

The lake stands still
I see Nothing but my shadow
The lake stands alone
I can only hope for tomorrow

Monday, April 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,mental illness,running away
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A friend of mine that I was very close to ran away from school. He suffers from depression but I didn't believe it because he could disguise it well. We used to spend our time by the lake but the lake was also the same place where he said, one night when he was alone, that he wanted to kill himself. So he left a suicide note and ran away on that night. I didn't have any contact from him for a couple of days but I thought he had died because the days before the event, we talked about suicide and how he would kill himself. I had never felt so alone and guilty.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jennifer Birchall 09 April 2019

I know a lot of people with depression like to wear a mask to cover up how they really feel underneath. It's an awful illness. A sad but wonderful poem dear Psyked

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Poppi Sykes 09 April 2019

Thank you Jennifer, it means a lot to me as does this poem

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