Last Night Poem by Poppi Sykes

Last Night

Rating: 5.0


She gets up in the afternoon
After she slept in the morning
Checks herself in the mirror,
lips quiver as a tear starts to well
Pours the rest of the fun from last night
on her bedroom drawer
She fears what had happened the night before
she looks appalled, her face is numb
from all the damage done
but as she inhales the fun
she turns to stone
Looks at her phone
For the memories, that become her discoveries
She does not recall, the brawl
Or the messy downfall
That hurt her persona
she ends in a coma
As the faceless
Disappear

That afternoon where she will reflect
She realises it's happened before
the grim reaper is correct
it's something she struggles to ignore
she cries as she recognises her emptiness
everything she strives for is unhappiness
but this is a mere day of remembrance
of what will happen last night
and so it stays an acceptance

Monday, April 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: celebration,death,drugs,girl,loneliness,routine
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is about a party girl's routine and how the end is close.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 08 April 2019

Well articulated and nicely penned with insight. A sad story of frustration and emptiness written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing, Psyked.

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Poppi Sykes 09 April 2019

Thank you Chinedu - I must admit that it does take a fair bit of courage to post and it makes me happy to know that someone has read it and decipher its message - Psyked

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O POET ME POET 10 April 2019

thanKs for the share do read MOMS SMILES IF FOR POET ME YOU CARE

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Jazib Kamalvi 09 April 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Psyked. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Nkosilathi Zinyane 09 April 2019

a very nice and enjoyable poem it draws one to an understanding of what is happening on the backdrop of what has happened.

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Poppi Sykes 09 April 2019

Thank you very much for your understanding! I am fairly new to writing and I struggle to show any of them to my family and friends. I am glad that someone can get something out of it - Psyked

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Susan Williams 08 April 2019

I am also adding it to my list of favorites

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Poppi Sykes 09 April 2019

Thank you very much Susan! This really encourages me to pursue my writing - Psyked

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Susan Williams 08 April 2019

Extremely fine writing- I saw this woman and her desperate loneliness. That's poetic power packed into your pen. 10+++++++++++

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Poppi Sykes 09 April 2019

if you liked this one, my poem 'Jack' is particularly close to me. Even a quick read and any criticism is helpful as well! Thank you - Psyked

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