It Is One Side Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

It Is One Side

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It is one side of coin
Other side still remains
To add few more sentences
Will show its true soul’s presence

Criticism means what?
Not to write about poet’s skill or poems draw backs
You may find it as fool’s paradise
But the message is full of promises

Poets do write
Inside mind they fight
Present the creation in a way they like
Some of the ideas may not strike

Readers may catch it in time
Bring it to the notice sometimes
Someone may criticize
Someone may try to oblige

Yet it is reader’s choice
There should be no surprise
They may offends or pleases
But certainly not in personal way to tease

It is wrong to point out
And foolishly talk about
Poet’s ability
You take it as blessings from almighty

Not everybody can write beautifully
Not all poets can stand successfully
Out of all, few may go up and blossom
But for all there is enough space and room

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2013

It is one side of coin Other side still remains

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2013

Fun reading Supratik Sen30 minutes ago There is a lot of judgement in the poem, it is full of prescriptions and proscriptions of the wise mind.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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