Musa Ndhlovu

Rookie - 164 Points (1994 April 04 / SOUTH AFRICA MPUMALANGA)

Is It You Or I? - Poem by Musa Ndhlovu

Who keeps knocking,
Knocking our relationship down.

For me I mean myself
Wanted to be with you yourself
Face all odds together.

Like no other has ever been together.
But you I mean yourself
Have your own odds of confusion.


Comments about Is It You Or I? by Musa Ndhlovu

  • Rookie - 237 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (6/20/2013 3:11:00 PM)

    I like your style, especially that repetition of 'you yourself'..
    Ane rhyme emnandi ama poems akho.keep writing.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 15, 2013


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