Is It You Or I? Poem by Musa Ndhlovu

Is It You Or I?



Who keeps knocking,
Knocking our relationship down.

For me I mean myself
Wanted to be with you yourself
Face all odds together.

Like no other has ever been together.
But you I mean yourself
Have your own odds of confusion.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siyabonga A Nxumalo 20 June 2013

I like your style, especially that repetition of 'you yourself'.. Ane rhyme emnandi ama poems akho.keep writing. Siya_! !

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Musa Ndhlovu

Musa Ndhlovu

SOUTH AFRICA MPUMALANGA
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