Musa Ndhlovu

Rookie - 164 Points (1994 April 04 / SOUTH AFRICA MPUMALANGA)

LET ME END THIS


Let me end this,
It is not what I had in mind.
End it? Not like this
But how can I use my mind?
I tried many ways making a way,
But still, it is not working anyway.
Why shouldn't I end this?
Why can't we both end this?
What is that left for you?
Move on, you have more than me.
They are better than me.
What is that left on me?
Move on, they have more than me.

Submitted: Saturday, June 15, 2013
Edited: Saturday, June 15, 2013

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I wrote this poem trying to figure out why was my lover is still with me even though I am no more useful for her. For some reasons manage to let her go.

Comments about this poem (LET ME END THIS by Musa Ndhlovu )

  • Silver Star - 3,478 Points Is It Poetry (6/28/2013 2:58:00 PM)

    It is good and sad to feel the way you
    felt at the time.
    Marchs on as do you.
    She is as the sky.
    You as the cloudless top....iip (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (6/15/2013 3:40:00 AM)

    love is the only act which is selfless two people in love give and never ask anything in return....now keep that in your mind and put yourself in her shoes.you'll get your answer

    a great write sir (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,404 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/15/2013 3:09:00 AM)

    move on, good write, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment, (Report) Reply

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