Into The Deep Poem by Valerie Dohren

Into The Deep

Rating: 5.0


Falling slowly into the deep
Slipping away from me
Falling yet through the bounds of time
Back to reality

Where worlds collide and disappear
Where all is calm and still
And so to be in perfect peace
Our purpose to fulfil

Falling slowly into the deep
Passing through layers of me
Watching, waiting for all that is
To see, to know, to be

Then with the coming of the dawn
To watch the rising sun
Growing brighter and brighter still
`Til all are joined as one

Falling slowly into the deep
Towards eternity
Slipping away from all that is
Into the shining sea

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 31 March 2018

Man has an ocean inside and, Falling slowly into the deep Towards eternity Slipping away from all that is Into the shining sea Simply great thought.

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Robert Green 09 April 2012

Hope you can get there, for some its too far, a great thought and write again Val :)

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Vanessa Hughes 30 March 2012

Love this too, the deep describes our innermost peace perfectly. x

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