Oh fare thee well
I`m off to hell -
A place may be
Reserved for me
But then, I smile,
I`ll wait awhile -
In case there`s space
In heaven`s place
But then, maybe
There`s nowhere free -
So here I`ll stay
Is that okay?
You made this old man laugh.A brief, cute and great flowinfg poem..Worth a ten
Ha, sorry for taking the last place in Hell- but I guess we should all stay here as long as possible, it's too interesting to forego, thanks for the laugh!
In three short stanzas you have summed up all of the options, glad to hear that you've chosen the later, great piece of writing as always.....
No, no! Don't go there. Please stay - in case there`s space in heaven`s place. I think you'll be be glad you did. Keep writing and inspiring Val. Thanks.
Cute, cute and well expressed. Read mine - Indebted - Adeline
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Like it, a really great flowing poem.