Intertwined (Aka: The Meaning Of Life) Poem by Nika McGuin

Intertwined (Aka: The Meaning Of Life)

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It seems to me
so many people waste time
contemplating the meaning of life
they read books about it
pray about it, meditate about it,
even see gurus about it

For me personally,
it's not something I have to
wonder and worry so hard about
day in and day out, constantly questioning
because, you see, I already know
I've made my own answer

'Life is like a river.'
when you know where you want to go
all roads lead to the same place
the same vision, the same destiny

All one must do, is keep on paddling
keep working onwards towards your dreams - the shore -
the way I see it: dreams, life's meaning, and life's purpose
are all inexplicably, inexorably intertwined

PS: If you lose your dream
somewhere down the stream
fish for a new one, and
make your own answer

Wednesday, January 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,purpose
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The line 'Life is a river' comes from Aleksander Hemon's 'The Lazarus Project.' In fact this poem is inspired by a passage in it. The passage was about a man who throughout his life fervently pursued the meaning of life. He did all those things listed in the first stanza and more. And to reach the guru he even climbed a mountain and nearly died in the process. When he got to the top he had to wait in a long line. When it was finally his turn, he asked the guru what the meaning of life is. The guru replied 'life is a river.' And the man was beyond pissed off. He didn't get how life was a river and the guru never explained it. The book also never explained it. So, this poem was my expression of what I believe it means. However, it is also the way I look at life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glen Kappy 27 April 2018

I like the practical outlook expressed here, Nika. It reminds me of a Carl Sandburg poem, Happinees, which I think you’ll like. -Glen

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Nika Mcguin 27 April 2018

Thanks for the comment and poem suggestion. You're right, I did enjoy reading his poem. It seems like his answer to the meaning of life/happiness - though open to interpretation - could be that it is family.

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Daniel Brick 20 January 2017

You write an earlier poem inspired by Hemon's novel which made me buy a copy, I have it next to my computer. Alas, I did not finish reading it - but I liked what I read! Your two poems are clearly from your creativity but Hemon's spirit must be deeply embedded in you. And what comes forth in your poem is a spiritual strength, even confidence which I find very moving. It is so clearly the result of deep thinking, or perhaps it's better to say, thoughts from deep inside shaped your poem. The essence of your poem is in the notion of things intertwined and recognizing one thread leads to another, to another.Our collected poems are mysteriously connected in this way and contain things even we who wrote them have to search for, pull out to understand.

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Tom Billsborough 19 January 2017

sounds like a really good way to look at Life, Nika. It's a very good poem and I like the way you have given the background in detail. You are a wise young lady.

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Valsa George 19 January 2017

A mature view on life! Life is an inexorable puzzle..... hard to be explained with mysteries never solved! As you have put it, it is a river in perpetual flow....! We can hardly direct its course. What we need do is 'keep on paddling '

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