Internal Photographs Poem by Nika McGuin
Internal Photographs
When we are together
my heart is light
my lungs fill with laughter
but my brain is consumed
with photographing every moment
for our time together grows short
You're going to miss me
when I'm gone, I know
I'm going to miss you more
being the one that's gone
I'm going to miss everything
I'm going to miss everything
but you most of all
I'm going to miss you
Heartfelt poem with strong emotions. Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Thanks for sharing.
A lovely heartwarming poem to the mother. Oh u are really going to miss her. U expressed that so well and poetically wow. Thumbs up. Pleez do write your thoughts under my newest poem too, titled, dark skinned vs fair skin, I would love to hear your views
Nika, this is such a beautiful heart-felt tribute to your mother. Congratulations on a very well-deserved Poem Of The Day. Although you will miss her, and she will miss you, you both have the advantage of modern technology. Unfortunately, I didn't have that luxury when my mother was alive. All the best in your new life!
Thanks so much Richard for the kind words and well wishes! And you're right, luckily there's a number of ways to keep in touch even from the other side of the earth. P.S. so sorry for your loss.
Congratulations on the Poem of the Day, Nika. This is a touching and wonderful tribute to someone very special.
There are so many ways to keep in touch with your Mother. Skype would keep you both in touch. Best of Luck and lovely to read.
Very true Lyn, we'll be using skype and facebook messenger. Thanks for lovely comment~.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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With new hopes and dreams, you are moving into another country and clime! Naturally you will miss your dear mother and your mother will miss you! Her missing will be definitely more as you are likely to be soon absorbed in many events that await you! Your mother on the other hand is in the same setting, but without you! A lovely tribute to your mother which I am sure will be greatly appreciated by her! Congratulations on this poem chosen as the poem of the day!
Thanks so much for your lovely comment Valsa. And you're right, I hadn't thought of it that way. It will probably be much harder for her than it will for me. In fact she's made me promise to call her three times a day! lol