Insight Poem by Lucifera Santez

Insight

Rating: 4.3


They say there is pain when your heart breaks,
Shattering over remnants of your soul,
Burning withering in confines of your ribs,
Engulfed by the grief
Sharp and cold.

But do they know how sharp it hurts
To love someone, then to let go,
Perhaps not,
Perchance they don’t care,
Don’t wish to hear the shouts,
Of lost souls from the shadows……….

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
something i came up with after reading Sidney Sheldon's 'Rage of Angels'.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 05 August 2013

Don’t wish to hear the shouts, Of lost souls from the shadows………. Well expressed, liked it.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 04 August 2013

The last two lines... I love. I've written a piece called Insight.

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But do they know how sharp it hurts... nice poem 10 hurts and hurts more....10

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