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Mermaid

Gleaming pond of maiden tears,
Adorned by wildflowers on its banks,
As butterflies rush on blooms,
She watches them from shining pond,
Her hair trailing her beside in cold,
A weaved piece of dark fairy gold,
Her eyes feel,
Face softens and nothing is said,
And far from shadows,
He watches his mermaid…….

Submitted: Saturday, August 03, 2013
Edited: Friday, August 30, 2013


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  • Dannielle Smedley (8/20/2013 4:26:00 PM)

    I love thie so much. Anything with the word 'mermaid' automatically will get me interested, but this was so beautifully written.

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  • Adheez Van Der Beanthz (8/14/2013 1:05:00 PM)

    wonderful imagery fused with amazing imagination
    very good poem
    awesome..! ! ! |

  • Thomas A Robinson (8/14/2013 12:14:00 PM)

    Merman? Or perhaps the mermaid is a maiden and he her man.

  • Karen Gonzalez-videla (8/14/2013 10:28:00 AM)

    Brilliant! You really are amazing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Everything you write is totally dazzling!

    Karen :)

  • Vizard Dhawan (8/8/2013 2:16:00 PM)

    beautiful and pure poem
    great reading

  • Hazel Durham (8/7/2013 10:04:00 AM)

    Stunning write with such beautiful imagery!

  • Yolandey Breedt (8/7/2013 5:37:00 AM)

    i really like this one as i like mystical creatures

  • Khairul Ahsan (8/5/2013 2:30:00 AM)

    And far from shadows,
    He watches his mermaid…….
    Simply wonderful! 10/10

  • Sally Plumb Plumb (8/5/2013 1:08:00 AM)

    A lovely picture.

  • Romeo Della Valle (8/4/2013 8:46:00 PM)

    A thought provoking and well crafted metaphoric write that clearly shows your writing abilities and talent! 10+++ Thanks for sharing and keep it up! Romeo, New York City

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