Mermaid Poem by Lucifera Santez

Mermaid

Rating: 5.0


Gleaming pond of maiden tears,
Adorned by wildflowers on its banks,
As butterflies rush on blooms,
She watches them from shining pond,
Her hair trailing her beside in cold,
A weaved piece of dark fairy gold,
Her eyes feel,
Face softens and nothing is said,
And far from shadows,
He watches his mermaid…….

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 03 August 2013

A great poem, like it.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 03 August 2013

She watches them from shining pond, Her hair trailing her beside in cold beautiful!

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Michael Oliver 03 August 2013

evocative imagery - sensuous in effect - I liked this

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Heather Wilkins 03 August 2013

i love the thought of mermaids nicely written

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Valerie Dohren 03 August 2013

You paint a lovely mermaid scene - very good.

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Dannielle Smedley 20 August 2013

I love thie so much. Anything with the word 'mermaid' automatically will get me interested, but this was so beautifully written.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 14 August 2013

wonderful imagery fused with amazing imagination very good poem awesome..! ! ! |

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Vishal Sharma 08 August 2013

beautiful and pure poem great reading

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Hazel Durham 07 August 2013

Stunning write with such beautiful imagery!

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Khairul Ahsan 05 August 2013

And far from shadows, He watches his mermaid……. Simply wonderful! 10/10

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