In You, I See Myself Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

In You, I See Myself

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From an unknown source you began your journey,
As a caressing mother to many barren lands.
You lived for their emotions and lesions-
To be dissolved in your surge of love.
Those barren lands who awaited for you,
Wished to engulf and drown their souls in you.
Your spume of smile vanishes their impurities;
But you're being melted by the heat of your lover
Who fills the hearts of many gloomy clouds
By the drops of your soul, he heals their wounds
And those clouds shower rain of diamonds
Upon your acephalous body as their love towards you.
Many fruits were ripened by your invisible roots
And your love fructify everyone.
Then, why you forgot to live your own life
In the paths you had crossed for them?
Oh, in you I see myself as if we're one soul
We wandered unknowingly for their ecstacy
But we ne'er knew the ebb and flow of life-
Awaiting an ocean for you and me far away.
I know we must reach and dissolve there
As one soul, one day.

Monday, September 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 11 November 2015

You never lose your golden idea, it flows like golden river in poetic paper

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Hans Vr 02 October 2015

Your poetry as mesmerizing and wonderfully beautiful as ever. I LOVE this

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 07 September 2015

Truly, emotional and heart touching poem indeed.......10

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