In Open Sky Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

In Open Sky



I shall be on the way
To see you in smiling way
In future never to be away
With whatever may be the difficulty on the way

I have desired from the beginning
With clear leaning
That I shall be under one roof
With physically present as proof

I have tested the separation
Suffered mentally agony and pain in relation
I can't any more in future
I shall make it sure

Yes, laugh and cry
And intent to fly
In open sky with freedom
That was enjoyed seldom

I shall love to see you around
Most probably in arms to be found
With precious smile witnessed ever
I shall hold you forever

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I shall be on the way To see you in smiling way

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good Anne Shoemaker5 minutes ago A bit repetitious in spots

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This is a good poem. AnnaMay Smolinsky5 minutes ago I enjoyed this poem. Comment +1

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Maricela Ramírez, Rohani Daud and Sajan Ahir like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1 today

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Maricela Ramírez, Rohani Daud and Sajan Ahir like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Savita Tyagi 17 July 2014

Lovely expressions of love. Very nice.

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)))) very nice Angelika) 4 minutes ago nivce poem with a good style Comment +1

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Lovely Robin Little5 minutes ago still think a rework will allow some of the stanzas to hold more content and expression

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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