Im Sorry Poem by danyelle tedrow

Im Sorry

Rating: 5.0


I dont no why i ever let you go every time i see your face i begain to weep every time i dream your face is there to great me i was so stupid im so sorry my dear i hope you for give me becuase this is my last day here on earth i hope you do forgive me my love

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sad lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 04 May 2012

Take it from a Pirate Captain, all the good adventures are here on earth. Stick around feel, write about what you feel, learn from it, and keep writing, keep feeling.

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Romeo Della Valle 23 April 2012

A lovely love confession and well penned but a very sad at the end (I hope that is not true what you said in the ending lines) 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! You are on the right track and remember what I said in my poem: In Pursuit of Happiness, what I thought was a great loss, it turned out to be a blessing from the sky! We learn the lessons of life and move on! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC

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