My Happy Ness Poem by danyelle tedrow

My Happy Ness

Rating: 5.0


my life was sad and alone till the day i meet you my soul was lost but you found it and you picked up the mess of my life and glued it back to gether you are the sun to my shine the beat to my heart your the one who made me smile and laugh you made me not so dark ene more

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Knight 14 December 2009

Hi Angel - This is much better glad I made you smile again Love you in Poetry - JOHN X

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Urshula Davis 09 July 2011

This is soo nice! ! i love it simple and plain!

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Romeo Della Valle 29 June 2011

Smiling is one of the secrets of happiness and you described very well in this excellent, well penned and poignant write! 10+++ Keep it up! Hoping you can read and enjoy my poem titled: IN PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS whenever time permits. Love and Peace for always! ..

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Dillon Gay 20 July 2010

Yeah, this reminds me of a couple people I've had in my life. Awwww......I miss them now......: (Oh, but great poem!

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Iron Panda 23™ 02 March 2010

i likes this \^-^/ it made the sun shine through dark clouds in my mind :)

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Ken E Hall 16 January 2010

I'm late for a very important date...however your poem held me it is original only you seem to hide behind words I think you need an i in happiness metaphoricregardsy++++10 regards

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